I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Talofa Trisanah Nevaeh here from Hornby Primary School. I really like your blog post about the Mariana Trench. From your blog post I have learned that the deeper you go down the trench it will be dark and strange.Your slideshow looked amazing! See you next time on our next blog!I wonder what sort of creatures live deep in the Mariana Trench?
hi trisanah, its cool that you put many facts. Maybe you could name the sea creature under the mariana trench or put some or many facts there? You also could search some images and screenshot it to the slide! see ya
Hi Trisanah (by bff), I like the part when you add the Mariana Trench background. This reminded me of when we started drawing the paper thing about our Mariana Trench city. Next time you could put some images about the Mariana trench Bye!!!
hi trianah its benaiah here i liked the way you put cool backgrounds you brought me back to when we did this in reading with mrs raisin why did you do this post bye
kia ora trisanah bea here, I really like this because I like it and maybe next time you could put more slide of mariana trench and the facts you have you used are really cool and I like it. See you later:)
Hi trisanah Addison here this slide is really eye catching I learned something about mariana trench you did so well on this blog it is AMAZON. From Addison
Hi trisanah, it's me soheilla! I like your post! its really hooking me in. you are good at catching them in your posts. did you think about adding more facts?.. maybe you could ask more questions for more people to answer! anyway, bog ya later!
cool slide trisanh its Ashton cool how you told us of how much of the sea has been mapped next time on the questions make it sound like it makes more sense.
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Talofa Trisanah Nevaeh here from Hornby Primary School. I really like your blog post about the Mariana Trench. From your blog post I have learned that the deeper you go down the trench it will be dark and strange.Your slideshow looked amazing! See you next time on our next blog!I wonder what sort of creatures live deep in the Mariana Trench?
ReplyDeletehi Trisanah Thomas here love your mariana trench slide i love the marianan trench
ReplyDeletehi Thomas here again i like your blog post it shares a lot about the mariana trench
ReplyDeleteHi trisanah its brodie.i like the way you made a slide about mariana trench.This part gave me a memory about when i did this.
ReplyDeletehi Trisanah its micah here i like your mariana trench it is cool ok but got to go ok bye
ReplyDeletehi trisanah, its cool that you put many facts. Maybe you could name the sea creature under the mariana trench or put some or many facts there? You also could search some images and screenshot it to the slide! see ya
ReplyDeleteHi Trisanah (by bff), I like the part when you add the Mariana Trench background. This reminded me of when we started drawing the paper thing about our Mariana Trench city. Next time you could put some images about the Mariana trench Bye!!!
ReplyDeletehi trianah its benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put cool backgrounds
you brought me back to when we did this in reading with mrs raisin
why did you do this post
bye
kia ora trisanah bea here,
ReplyDeleteI really like this because I like it and maybe next time you could put more slide of mariana trench and the facts you have you used are really cool and I like it.
See you later:)
Hi trisanah Addison here this slide is really eye catching I learned something about mariana trench you did so well on this blog it is AMAZON.
ReplyDeleteFrom Addison
Hi trisanah, it's me soheilla! I like your post! its really hooking me in. you are good at catching them in your posts. did you think about adding more facts?.. maybe you could ask more questions for more people to answer! anyway, bog ya later!
ReplyDeletecool slide trisanh its Ashton cool how you told us of how much of the sea has been mapped next time on the questions make it sound like it makes more sense.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora!
ReplyDeleteI like your Mariana trench slide I am impressed how many comments you have make sure to put more so a lot of comments will come