I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Trisanah it Olivia H here I loved the part when you said Raewyn was you best friend it is nice to say that do you think about adding more stuff to you blog post why did you that wirt my friend is raewyn and cool
Hi Trisanah its Chevelle here. How come you put only cool Raewyn is my friend. Did you think about putting more into this blog post. I liked the way you put a capital in Raewyns name.
Hello Trisanah, Riley here! this is cool you could of done a slide & tell people why raewyn is your friend? did you think about how you could improve? anyway i going now bye Trisanah!
Bonjour Trisanah! Isabella here! I really liked that you said that Raewyn was your best friend,That is really nice! Also How come did you name the blog post cool? Maybe Add some more things about yourself and Maybe think of how you can improve. Anyways Blog ya later Bye!!
Kia Ora Trisanah, Acasia here I like how you have added the two emojis I think it makes your post a little more interesting. Maybe next time you could have added more information? What do you like about Raewyn? Did you think too improve? But over all this is still good.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Trisanah! Great to see you posting on your blog, well done. What things do you like to learn about at school?
ReplyDeleteHi Trisanah it Olivia H here
ReplyDeleteI loved the part when you said Raewyn was you best friend it is nice to say that
do you think about adding more stuff to you blog post
why did you that wirt my friend is raewyn and cool
Hi Trisanah its Chevelle here. How come you put only cool Raewyn is my friend. Did you think about putting more into this blog post. I liked the way you put a capital in Raewyns name.
ReplyDeleteHello Trisanah, Riley here!
ReplyDeletethis is cool
you could of done a slide & tell people why raewyn is your friend?
did you think about how you could improve?
anyway i going now bye Trisanah!
Bonjour Trisanah!
ReplyDeleteIsabella here!
I really liked that you said that Raewyn was your best friend,That is really nice!
Also How come did you name the blog post cool?
Maybe Add some more things about yourself and Maybe think of how you can improve.
Anyways Blog ya later Bye!!
Kia Ora Trisanah, Acasia here
ReplyDeleteI like how you have added the two emojis I think it makes your post a little more interesting. Maybe next time you could have added more information? What do you like about Raewyn? Did you think too improve? But over all this is still good.